Last week we have been reading about whales. It was about Save the whales. The story was quite sad because it was a whales stranding and some of the whales had died and only a few of them had survived.
But at the end they went back to the ocean but a few of the whales had survived.
I hope you like my letter about save the whales. Bye ................
Hi Karmi, this is great!
ReplyDeleteIt has a lot of information, and a baby whale 2 meters long!?! Wow!
I'm sad that so many whaels died, but I'm glad some lived!
I really do like it. Well done!
-Lucy
Thanks Lucy for that.
DeleteKia Ora Karmi, I love your writing!
ReplyDeleteIt has lots of information about the whales.
It is quite a sad story but at least some of the whales lived.
Ka Pai!
-Harper
Thanks
DeleteKia Ora Karmi, your writing is very good. It has a lot of info about whales I'm glad some whales lived but I'm sad some died. Good Job
ReplyDeleteJessica
Hi Karmi I love this blog post. You have some spelling mistakes that you could fix but apart from that it is awesome and what happened to the whales in the end. Good job. From Danica.
ReplyDeleteThanks Danica
DeleteKarmi I totally agree this was quite a sad story! But interesting to learn about ways we can help whales, imagine if this happened here!
ReplyDeleteMiss Leigh
Thank you Miss Leigh
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